Friday, August 30, 2019

daffodil day poem

Daffodil day
daffodils are as yellow as a fire fly.
Daffodils represent the censer sensitise they use money on people who have censer .
What is daffodil day?
a daffodil is a bright yellow flower with a long stem.

Next time I could adjectives. I like how I have talked about the different parts of the daffodil.
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2 comments:

  1. Room 1September 23, 2019 at 11:49 AM

    Amazing poem Fraser! I like your sketch as well. I was wondering if maybe you could just have a look at your punctuation even though in a poem I know you can get away without it.

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  2. JoelSeptember 23, 2019 at 11:55 AM

    nice poem and drawing! it look really good but I think you could of checked your spelling.

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