This is my persimmon show don't tell

Persimmons

The weird aromas it was a slimy,  orange fruit going up my nostrils smells like apples. The orange fruit had thick hard layers of skin. As the teacher tells us to take a bite out of the slimy fruit the teacher does a countdown 3,2,1, CRUNCH!!!! Most people had joy on there faces but for some did not have any joy on their faces. Just like me. Some people in my class were saying eemm!!!

This fruit was very very sweet just like a sweet apple. But different. For  me it was very weird kinda hard though. The skin on mine was lumpy. It had black dots on it and was not slimy. I did not like the orange fruit some other people in my class did not like it to.  Some people had seeds that were very HARD! I did not have a seed that was as hard as a rock!. It sounds like air.

The fruit was medium size like an apple size but not an apple an orange fruit it felt like juicy apple most people in my class ate the skin but I did not want to because some people said it tasted the same but I did not like the orange fruit.

It was a persimmon

Did you know that this fruit came from china?

Made by Fraser