What is the ocean?
It is an flat bit for people to relax
It is also home for saltwater creatures
Saltwater plants provide us with oxygen
It is the ocean!
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The apple falls
leafs scattered around throw the light wind
slowly growing
I learnt that haiku poems were started in japan.
Next time I could add more images.
I like how it is readable.
Friday, May 3, 2019
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I like how you have put an emoji boat.
ReplyDeleteI think you need to put a full stop at the apples fall.
at the end
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